4 thoughts on “With Gratitude

  1. I like what you have done here. The previous version is very beautiful, yet sad. Love the ending, very powerful: “unable to live/ and unable to die”. It expresses very well what happens after a shattered love relationship. The blackout poem is also very well done and captures the essence of the whole life experience explained in the first poem. Very original idea.

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